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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 12, 2011 4:51:19 GMT
So what do you think of Hoshi now? Still a cool guy?
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Post by vegeta on Feb 12, 2011 4:55:50 GMT
Hey guys, what did I say earlier.... About the foreboding nature of this guy? Man, he's a good manipulator.
The way I see it, it's a 50/50 chance from the voter's perspective.
B vote
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 4:57:52 GMT
Yes. I continue to hold faith in my only current point of interest so far.
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Post by Forte on Feb 12, 2011 4:58:31 GMT
A. Create a cave-in born of hatred, etc.
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 5:02:39 GMT
Two favorable outcomes:
1. Hoshi is a double agent.
2. Hoshi is really an asshole, kills Fu, and takes over as the MC.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 12, 2011 5:02:59 GMT
B Majority? Sorry guys, Fuu doesn't get a happy ending. CANON ENDING GO
It's over
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 5:05:45 GMT
Alright, its been fun. Still not angry. Gonna stick with B.
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Post by Forte on Feb 12, 2011 5:06:26 GMT
Wait, seriously?
If that's seriously it I'll step outside to rage in the Canadian winter
Well, not really. I guess I'll rage silently inside. I have to go to work later this morning anyways.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 12, 2011 5:07:10 GMT
SERIOUS BRO
Nah, not really. I enjoy your faith in these characters lol
Update in a bit
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 5:11:04 GMT
Hoshi has a heart, believe it!
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Post by Forte on Feb 12, 2011 5:25:51 GMT
THE HEART
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 12, 2011 5:26:51 GMT
Yea. I guess
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 5:41:51 GMT
Stop your guessing and update.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 12, 2011 6:28:40 GMT
You want to cry out Hoshi’s name, ask him to save you, but it seems you’re unable. You let your head drop once more, giving up your strength. Tears spill from your eyes, though the sobs cannot get through the tape. At this rate, death didn’t seem so bad, months together and not even a tinge of love. Heart broken, yet you don’t feel a wrench in your heart, instead something gripping. Maybe it was what others would call hope, or maybe faith.
You hung limp on the wall for who knows how long, it just wasn’t tomorrow yet because no one had come for you yet. All this over what? The bijuu inside you probably. There were rumors floating that a group attacked suna and kidnapped their leader. Apparently he was a jinchuuriki too, coincidence? Maybe, but the villagers sure didn’t hope so, they wanted to you gone.
Your thoughts begin to focus on the villagers, only to return to Hoshi every time. The only one person to treat you like a person. But he was fake in the end. As if you asked to be born a living sacrifice, to be born hated by mankind. You wonder why the burden is yours to bear. But when did the heavens declare that monsters can’t be loved? Why did a good morning, become the day that you were assigned your death sentence?
Someone was stripping the tape on your mouth, carefully peeling it away. You can’t see their face but they’re wearing a dark cloak, not exactly like that of the two strangers that attacked. Mostly delirious, you hopefully whisper, “Hoshi”
“Yea?” A voice whispered back. You begin to feel pain in your arms and legs, but the sensation is there.
Your body is still broken and aching, albeit healing rapidly; you keep your eyes closed, half conscious; but you can smell Hoshi’s hair against your nose. He was carrying you. You feel cold air gradually surrounding you, colder and colder. It was freezing, should’ve brought the cloak today.
You hear the rustle of leaves and bushes, you begin to open your eyes and take in your surroundings. “Hoshi…your hair smells nice.” Your hands and legs still have sharp pains, but the feeling of pain is slowly fading.
“ I know.” You hold onto his neck tightly, realizing that he’s carrying you through the treetops.
“Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave!”
The sudden roar of rushing water startles you. You turn to view an enormous wave of water rolling behind you.
“Hold on!” Suddenly underwater, being washed away by a strong current, on land though. Hoshi grabs your hand and then your arm, pull you both to the surface of the water. You spit out the water and gasp for air.
“Can you escape on your own?” Now fully awake, the entire area was flooded with water, though draining quickly, but still, you couldn’t even see the tops of the giant trees. You turn to Hoshi who’s already wielding two scrolls, ready to fight apparently.
A. Lie and say you can’t so he’ll be forced to escape, or help with the escape (Same result)
B. Allow him to fight on his own
C. Fight with him
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 6:36:11 GMT
Oh, A. We need to get the **** out of here. I'm not messing with Kisame and Itachi, that's for damn sure. Preferably help with the escape.
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Post by Forte on Feb 12, 2011 6:38:38 GMT
A - best answer imho
B - herp de derp, since we like him and all
C - If you want to die together like Romeo and Juliet
That being said, A please.
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Post by vegeta on Feb 12, 2011 6:46:05 GMT
A vote
I really, really hate how touching that was.... Frick! What an intimate moment...
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 6:52:10 GMT
I lol'd at
"Your hair smells nice..."
"I know."
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Post by impatience on Feb 12, 2011 12:55:29 GMT
Let him block/negate/hold back the jutsu, while you set up some traps (bijuu bomb detonated from a distance?) before you (try to) escape together.
Essentially A but with a touch of B. Wanna see what he can do.
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 12, 2011 16:57:29 GMT
Btw, cactus, I'm kind of digging this one. Hoshi reminds me of Hei with his ballin acting skills and second guessing his orders due to personal feelings. Then we have Fu with dem abdominals and low riding skirt. And emotions, too.
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Post by Forte on Feb 12, 2011 22:39:08 GMT
Yeah, man. One of my favorite reads. I have a soft spot for character-driven stuff like this. Both in terms of following and authoring.
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 13, 2011 3:15:49 GMT
I'm getting cranky without my update
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 13, 2011 3:51:18 GMT
Sorry, came down with the flu. I've been sleeping most of the day. I'll try to update this too
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 13, 2011 3:58:00 GMT
I've got it, too. Flu shot didnt work worth a damn
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Post by Forte on Feb 13, 2011 4:27:19 GMT
I haven't gotten the flu yet, thankfully. Though someone's gonna herp derp and give it to me one of these days.
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