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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 10, 2011 5:44:17 GMT
E. Terror Barrage + Shock therapy while he's distracted
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Post by kieo on Feb 10, 2011 6:35:11 GMT
"Hmmm I have to find a ninja of the Sand this should be interesting," Dosu says fixing the large metal thing on his arm. While he's babbling you're already preparing your hand seals and quickly clap. "Terror Barrage!" A grin crosses your face as Dosu's body jerks and he raises his guard "protecting" himself from the oncoming kunais
You quickly race forward already preparing another sleight of hand seals. Pretty much every other Sand ninja has fought at this point and they've all shown great performances, so you need to do the same, and if it means ending this quickly then that's exactly what you'll be doing. When Dosu begins to snap out of your genjutsu you place your palm against his chest. "Shock Therapy!"
Dosu's body begins to convulse violently as "lightening" runs through him. You quickly draw your kunai and go for the finishing blow but Dosu quickly catches your arm with his left hand. He's panting slightly due to the mental attacks you've been forcing on him. Dosu quickly swings his arm, trying to punch you, but you quickly move your head back to dodge. Your eyes open wide and you begin to feel sick. Dosu grins and quickly punches you in the face then kicks you in the chest, sending you back several feet
You roll on the ground feeling like you're about to throw up, what the hell did he do?! Dosu's running at you again so you quickly jump to your feet and begin to engage him in taijutsu. You exchange a few blows with no one gaining much ground, until Dosu throws a powerful right hook into your stomach. You feel your body begin to vibrate until you're launched backwards
You struggle to your knees and puke a few times on the ground. Dosu seems to be grinning several feet in front of you, adjusting the metal thing on his arm. If your analysis is correct he's using sound vibrations to screw you up, basically the equivalent of all your sound genjutsu except reversed into more physical punishment. If this is what you were putting your enemies through you almost felt sorry for them
"I guess you've figured it out huh?" Dosu says, you guess he's grinning under his facial wrappings, "Even if my punches miss the sound vibrations will still do you in. Meaning that even if we're in close range you'll have your work cut out for you to avoid the sound vibrations that I'll send coursing through your body. I'll win this fight no matter what you do."
Dosu quickly races at you and throws a punch with his left arm. You dodge it and check his punch when he throws his right hand at you. When your hand and his fist meet you can feel the vibrations go up your arm and through your body. You ignore the eerie feeling and knee Dosu in the stomach, causing him to gasp. Gentaijutsu time, you quickly charge some chakra into your hands and punch Dosu in the chest and then on his side with a right hook
You take a step back and quickly kick Dosu in the face knocking some chakra into his head making it easier to disrupt his chakra up there. You reel back and punch his right shoulder with a lot of strength and forcing a good deal of chakra into his system. As you go for a left hook Dosu quickly catches your arm and twists it, before turning, and throwing you over his shoulder. He continues to hold your left arm with his left arm as you hear the very low almost inaudible sound coming from the machine on his right arm
He continues to twist your left arm as the amplifier on his right arm pours more and more sound waves which begins to throw your thoughts out of whack. You quickly reach into your ninja pouch and pull a kunai out and stab Dosu in the foot with as much force as you can muster. You jump to your feet and almost fall to the ground again, the sound waves he was emitting was messing with your system almost exactly like your World Scrambler does to your enemies. You stumble backwards about ten feet as Dosu yells in pain, pulling the kunai out of his foot
"Sound Cannon!" Dosu says sticking his palm out. You quickly roll the side as a huge blast of sound emits forward, breaking some of the ground all the way to the wall where it causes several large cracks in the wall. What a devastating attack, if you got hit by that you'd be screwed. "Come on is that all you got? If it is this round will be easier than I expected."
E: Free Choice
Chakra: 300
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Post by vegeta on Feb 10, 2011 6:44:07 GMT
Ice's vote
I don't necessarily agree with his strategy, but I want to see an update.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 10, 2011 6:46:39 GMT
Jutsu fake > Shunshin > Snap dosu's neck
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 10, 2011 7:38:15 GMT
Stasis Hold (Dosu's arms) + Shunshin + Lockdown (Dosu's arms)
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Post by kieo on Feb 10, 2011 18:13:12 GMT
When you guys decide something I'll post but I'm leaving to sled soon so we'll see when I will post
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 3:41:08 GMT
We're good to go kieo.
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 5:25:00 GMT
You quickly perform several hand seals and use your new jutsu Stasis Hold on Dosu's arms. He tries to move them for another attack but can't, now's your chance. You shunshin next to Dosu and perform even more hand seals. You stick out your index and middle fingers in an attempt to seal Dosu's arm. You barely touch them before Dosu quickly moves to the side and kicks you across the face
You stumble to the side before Dosu jumps back, his arms limp by his side as their still under your genjutsu's hold. "Interesting so you're definitely a genjutsu specialist with some backing in taijutsu. And you do have some sound genjutsu at your disposal, this should be interesting indeed," Dosu says stretching his arms then pointing one at you, "Sound Cannon!"
You quickly jump to the side to avoid the attack but the attack catches your legs. The power of the attack catches your legs and sends you back a few feet, flat on your face. When you get up you see Dosu stretching his right arm. "Looks like you managed to seal my right arm a little bit with that last blow, but not full on, haha you're really working at throwing my chakra flow off aren't you," Dosu says running at you
You jump to your feet and raise your guard as Dosu throws a punch. You block it and dodge his second punch but the high pitch that Dosu's amplifier emits makes it feel like your ear and brain are about to explode. Dosu places his hand on your chest and groans for a few seconds, probably trying to focus chakra into his sealed off arm. You throw a punch and connect with his face before Dosu launches a powerful sound blast which sends you flying and makes you feel like your entire body is shaking
You crash against the wall and sit there for a few seconds trying to grab hold of reality. Your eye sight's completely messed up and you just see things shaking in front of you and extremely blurry. You raise your hand to your right ear and feel blood coming out slowly. Snapping a few times you barely hear anything from your right ear and your left is only somewhat out of it. You get up slowly but surely and your vision returns to you
Looking over at Dosu you see he's in deep concentration, holding his right arm with his left hand. If anything because you didn't fully evoke your Lockdown jutsu on him but did manage to get some on him and apparently it had been slow to take effect. The vibrations through your body seem to stop and you're feeling as back to normal as possible, with most of your hearing missing in your right ear. Dosu's still focusing on his right arm trying to break the sealing jutsu, now's the time to act
E: Free Choice
Chakra: 235
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Post by vegeta on Feb 11, 2011 5:39:23 GMT
World Scrambler (235 - 70 = 165) > Shunshin (165 - 5 = 160) > Sharpen (160 - 25 = 135) > Stab his other foot > Break his damn neck while he's on the ground.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on Feb 11, 2011 5:44:09 GMT
Hmm
World Scrambler (235 - 70 = 165) > Shunshin (165 - 5 = 160) > Sharpen (160 - 25 = 135) > Stab his other foot > Break his damn neck while he's on the ground
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 8:04:01 GMT
You quickly perform the hand seals for World Scramblers, and as soon as you clap you see Dosu's head fidget. You shunshin next to Dosu and prepare your hand seals for Sharpen. As you touch Dosu's arm he quickly swings his right arm hitting you in the face with his amplifier. You fall to the ground, hitting your head, and groaning in pain, it feels like he busted your nose with that last hit. You jump up and kick Dosu in the side knocking him to the side several steps
Dosu catches himself fairly well for someone who should be under the influence of your World Scrambler. He begins to laugh as he sees the look on your face as you try to figure out what's going on. "Wondering why your sound genjutsu didn't work to well are you?" Dosu said grabbing his side, at least one genjutsu seemed to work, "I've yet to completely unlock the seal you placed on my arm but I am managing to send chakra into my arm and releasing constant low frequency sounds, different of course from the more advanced ones I use for my attacks. The constant frequencies are used while I'm focused on them so that the sound waves you use with your sound genjutsu will be disrupted by my chakra thus I will know when you're using one and be able to kai almost immediately with little to no effect on me. Sure it's slowly draining my chakra but it makes your sound genjutsu pretty much null and void. Oh and the best part, Sound Reversal!"
Your view of Dosu quickly becomes distorted and eventually in a type of tunnel vision. You take a step back and it feels like your feet are several stories behind you. You're in your own World Scrambler! This guy had just turned your two best genjutsu and made them near useless. He was definitely turning this fight around and you needed to do something drastic to begin your comeback. You reach into your ninja pouch and pull out a kunai, time for a risky move but to fight an enemy like this you had to do something out there. You slowly shove the kunai slowly into your left ear trying to suppress the yells that are coming with the pain. Looking up your vision's returned to normal and you barely hear anything out of either ear, sure he can still move sound through your body but it was going to be more difficult and chakra consuming on his part
Your attention quickly reverts to Dosu who seems to be trying to kai out of Sharpen and unseal his right arm, he probably still thinks you're caught up in World Scrambler. You shunshin forward punch Dosu square in the face using some gentaijutsu to disrupt the chakra flow going into his head, you remember your dad teaching you taht it was important to do damage to the brain since that's where genjutsu centers. You hear Dosu's nose crack and blood begin to cover his bandages. You quickly spin kick and hit him in the side in the same place you had hit him earlier
Dosu swings his right arm again and you feel the vibrations go through your body but he was definitely directing the sound waves to your ears which could barely hear as it is. The affect of Dosu's attack did barely anything and you managed to land a good punch to his heart and then headbutt him in his already broken nose. It looks like Dosu's groaning in pain but you can't tell so you continue your attack. Dosu quickly checks your next attacks and launches a huge blast of sound at you which sends you flying back several feet. Dosu pants as he raises his up and the amplifier begins to shake for a couple of seconds before launching a huge blast of sound which cracked the ground below you apart
You shunshin away and watch as the sound destroys the wall behind where you were. Dosu turns to you and looks like he's saying something but you can't hear what he's saying. You wonder if he's figured it out yet. Dosu raises his arm again and the amplifier begins to shake violently, if what he said earlier was true he was wasting a crap load of chakra to use his attacks, which was good, meaning he was hopefully at his wit's end. A little more and you might be able to take him down if anything you're going to have to find a way to catch him off guard and catch him in one of your more advanced genjutsu or at least try to wear him down til he can't fight anymore. At least by the looks of things he's still somewhat trapped in Lockdown and completely trapped in Sharpen
E: Free Choice
Chakra: 129
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 14:27:37 GMT
heh, I had a bad feeling about world scrambler before that's why I didn't use it before. Looks like my intuition was right.
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 15:11:44 GMT
Jutsu fake to make it look like world scrambler while doing a yell + Stasis hold (Dosu's legs) + Shunshin + use shock therapy on Dosu leg that doesn't have a stabbed foot
After using jutsu fake could we make stasis hold look like a different jutsu?
I'm really feeling shock therapy will end this with sharpen.
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Post by vegeta on Feb 11, 2011 16:32:37 GMT
I had a bad idea about World Scrambler before the fight. But when Terror Barrage worked, I thought we could get away with WS. I'll be honest, I read the first paragraph of this update, and I was mad. It's good to see that our touch-based genjutsu is working though.
Also Kieo, could you please update the databooks after this fight?
Jutsu Fake (129 - 15 = 114) + Yell > Stasis Hold (114 - 20 = 94) > Shunshin (94 - 5 = 89)> Shock Therapy (89 - 25 = 64)
I'm debating killing Dosu. I REALLY want to, especially since Dosu is part of Orochimaru's crew, and I don't want him coming back. I also think that Ray could kill when it's necessary, but this probably isn't the right environment with everyone watching.
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 17:37:41 GMT
Sorry I've never really explained Jutus Fake. The way it works is it's only a few hand seals long which when using makes it look like you're doing a jutsu of your choosing, in this case World Scrambler, but instead you can do another jutsu so you link Jutsu Fake with another one in this case Stasis Hold
And I'm not really planning on doing a new databook until either before or after the Invasion since there won't be much training to raise stats in between
Anyways locked and posting
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 18:07:29 GMT
You begin your hand seals for Jutsu Fake which catches Dosu's attention, except thanks to Jutsu Fake it looks like you're doing World Scrambler so you let out a yell while really doing Stasis Hold. You can see Dosu was trying to do something then noticing he couldn't move his legs. You shunshin over to Dosu and quickly use Shock Therapy on his good leg
This time even with your extremely impaired hearing you can hear Dosu's scream of pain. You pull back and give him your strongest possible punch and nail him in the stomach. You can see Dosu's face contort with pain as he's thrown backwards, falling to the ground since his legs were still paralyzed. The bandages on his face are coming off and you can now see the rest of his blood soaked face
You race at Dosu, going for the finishing blow put Dosu quickly puts his right arm up. You can hear him roar as the amplifier begins to shake so much it begins to crack and break apart. The sound it's emitting begins to reach you and begin to mess up with your brain. Dosu slowly gets up but falls to a knee, probably still under Stasis Hold somewhat you then see him mouth "I'll just turn your brain to mush you stupid Sand ninja, no more fucking around, Sound Decimation."
He's definitely at his whit's end and using this technique to end it. You can feel your entire body begin to shaking and liquid begin to flow out of your ears. Your vision suddenly becomes disoriented as your entire body continues to convulse. And the pain oh my god you're in horrible pain as you fall to the ground, you slowly go into the fetal position as you continue to shake. NO! You slowly try to get up and begin to take several steps towards Dosu
This is definitely one of the hardest things you've ever done as you need to focus on your entire body just to move yourself a few inches. Looking at Dosu you can see that his arm is vibrating heavily as well and you think his amplifier is breaking apart but you can't really tell for sure seeing as your vision is completely fucked up. Three more steps. Two more steps. Almost there. Oh my god the pain is to extreme and you think you may be losing your touch on reality as well seeing as you can't see anything perfectly at all
This is worse than any genjutsu you've ever done but if you can make it out alive, without having your brain be complete mush, you may be able to learn a thing or two from Dosu. Using the last of your strength you finally get to Dosu and even with your vision, you can see the fear on his face as you pull back and muster all your energy for one last punch to the face which would hopefully end this fight
Then a thought crossed your mind, you could kill this fucker right here and now for trying to kill you, it's not like it's not okay to kill someone, though it is kind of unsportsmanlike. He was messing you up bad and you didn't know how you'd be able to move and what not after Dosu's attack so maybe you could mess him up just as badly, if not worse. Then again you are trying to prove you're different from Gaara so maybe just knocking Dosu out is the best way to go about this. Well you can punch him square in the face and knock him out, Shock Therapy his head and damage him in ways you don't even know, or use as much chakra as you can in a gentaijutsu style punch to the heart which could stop his heart from beating...
A: Punch for clean victory B: Shock Therapy for the disabling victory C: Gentaijutsu punch for the kill D: Free Choice
Chakra: 64
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 18:08:50 GMT
Just to let you know what you guys did was a great idea and the Sound Decimation would've come no matter what and you could've been in a much worse situation then what you're in now
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 20:02:27 GMT
Vote A, hit him so hard that the back of Dosu's head hits the floor to knock him out.
The problem I have with B is that it may not knock Dosu out because he's survived 2 shock therapys before.
C requires a precise blow to the heart, which Ray cannot do because his vision is impaired.
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Post by vegeta on Feb 11, 2011 20:17:04 GMT
A is classy and more morally correct than all of them.
B may not knock Dosu out, but it would probably make him retarded. Heck, I'd probably do two shock therapies since we have the chakra. But making him retarded is probably worse than death. It might make us look bad.
C is exactly what I thought it would be. This isn't the right situation to kill someone.
Voting A
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 21:19:32 GMT
You push forth and throw the punch with all your might slamming into Dosu's already broken nose. Dosu slides back several feet before falling over and slamming his head against the ground. His amplifier hits the ground and completely breaks now as no more sound emits from it. You fall to your knees and start puking your guts out, several times until it's nothing but clear liquid that surrounds you. You look up and your vision begins to focus again as you see Dosu laying on the ground motionless
The proctor shunshins by Dosu and checks his vitals. "By knockout Ray is the winner. Docs get over here and tend to them Dosu's out cold and his nose is completely shattered, some of it may have gone deep into his head. Ray looks to be pretty shaken up to," he yells loud enough for you to hear. Jagar shunshins in front of you and helps you to your feet and holds you stable. He looks down at you and sees how messed up you look
A medical ninja comes over and begins to talk to Jagar but you can't really hear much of anything. As the other medical ninjas take Dosu away on a stretcher. You admire your handy work for a little bit before puking again. Jagar and teh medical ninja take you up to the rafters. Axel and Jamie greet you and are probably saying congratulations and that you did a good job but you can't hear a thing
The medical ninja moves his hands over your ears and after a minute or two your hearing partially returns so that you can hear what's going on around you. "Your jounin asked me to heal you to the point where you can stick around for the end of the prelims and see your other teammates fight. But after this you need to go to the hospital immediately," he says as you nod still feeling a lot of pain coursing through your body
You lean up against the railing and see Axel fighting against a fat Leaf genin. The battle is pretty humorous as the fat kid turned into a giant ball and went after Axel. Axel stretches his limbs and the match quickly turns into a pinball match with Axel stretching his limbs so that Chouji would fly in one direction, hit several walls, come back, bounce off of Axel's limbs again. The process repeated until Axel finally ended the match with a powerful Corkscrew Blast which sent Chouji flying away. Winner Axel
The only genin left was Kankuro who apparently got a by and automatically passed to the next round. After that was decided all the winners lined up in front of the Hokage and the proctors of all the exams who explained what would be happening in the next round. Big tournament, people from all over, representing your village, can become a chunin without winning, yada, yada, yada, yada. Finally the proctor of the second exam went around handing everyone a slip of paper with a number on it. You had the number five
The proctor of the first exams quickly draws up a tournament list and holds it up. "The end of the chunin exams will proceed as so," he says showing the board
Naruto vs Neji---- l-------------- Temari vs Jamie-- l l Ray vs Shikamaru-------- l--------------- l l Axel vs Kankuro---- l----- l l------l Sasuke vs Gaara---
(sorry that it's really makeshift)
You're fighting that Shikamaru guy in the first round, interesting he used his shadow to fight but didn't seem to have many offensive jutsu. As the Hokage explains you have a month to train before the exam you suddenly fall flat on your face and blackout, how embarrassing...
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You wake up with a groan. Why is it that whenever you were just in something serious you end up blacking out, you really need to work on that, then again you just had your entire body screwed with via extensive exposure to sound waves. You look around and see you're in a Konoha hospital and according to the date on a nearby clock you've only been out for two days, not terrible. Jagar enters the room and seems content that you're awak
"Great to see that you're finally up. Feeling anywhere near one hundred percent yet?" Jagar says sitting in a nearby chair
"Maybe sixty or seventy percent. My ears still ache a little but they seem like their almost back to normal," you say snapping next to your ears
"Good. Look you need to train as soon as possible. These exams are very important to Sunagakure and you need to take them incredibly seriously," Jagar says looking out the window for a second or two, "I'll explain that in due time, this Shikamaru guy will probably give you a run for your money since I was talking to his jounin and he's incredibly smart."
"So what should I work on?" you say stretching
"There's several things but you should focus on one of the four options I'm going to give you. See by watching your last fight I've come to see that you have genjutsu trumps but no real game winning trumps that can effectively win a battle. So for once I'd suggest staying away from genjutsu training," Jagar says setting four notecards in front of you
"So what should I train if I can't advance my genjutsu more?" you ask looking at what's written on each card
"You can learn a powerful summoning technique from your father which should aid you with power and what not and you'd learn your family's summoning of turtles and tortoises. You can work on your raiton with your mother to get some more spammable attack moves and maybe a decent ninjutsu trump. There's also fuinjutsu that you can work on with your mother as well to learn various forms of sealing things. Finally there's also advancing gentaijutsu since you're still rather sloppy with it and can better your style," Jagar says scratching his beer
"So you're saying to only focus on one? They all sound like awesome additions to my style," you say thinking of everything you could learn to do
"As true as that is you only have a month. I think it's important to keep to one right now to truly get a grip on it instead of being extremely imbalanced," Jagar says getting up, "Trust me as you grow you'll have plenty of time to and master all of these techniques and then some. For now let's focus on one. So pick."
A: Summoning with daddy B: Raiton with mommy C: Fuinjutsu with mommy D: Gentaijutsu with daddy/Jagar
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Post by kieo on Feb 11, 2011 21:22:23 GMT
So the bracket didn't turn out as well as I planned but it's basically
Naruto vs Neji Temari vs Jamie Ray vs Shikamaru Axel vs Kankuro Sasuke vs Gaara
The last four have an extra match
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 21:38:10 GMT
A is probably the easiest way to win against shikamaru, so I'm going with that.
It'll be interesting to see if Axel and Jamie are forced to quit because they're up against sand nins.
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Post by vegeta on Feb 11, 2011 22:27:34 GMT
I agree with the summoning as well.
A vote
We'll get ninjutsu, defense, and a second body for Shikamaru to worry about on the battlefield. This battle is going to be fun and intense. We need to be careful about Skika's battle sense and prediction.
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 11, 2011 23:40:51 GMT
I think for Shikamaru, we can't use use our sound genjutsus because he may bring ear plugs. Also jutsu fake will not work on shika because he saw what handseals it takes for that. If Shika can look at a persons fingers and get info off that you can bet he's already figured how jutsu fake works.
In general he has seen every jutsu we know except the basic ones and eye twist. He can plan for almost everyting we have.
Question- when we use eye twist does the depth perception change once or does it change constantly? Can we change how much the depth perception changes with each use of eye twist or is it a random amount of change?
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Post by vegeta on Feb 11, 2011 23:51:05 GMT
I think that the only thing that will catch him by surprise is our summon. He's seen every other jutsu that we have. He knows we use physical, aural, and visual genjutsu, and that we can be proficient in taijutsu. We're in for another tough battle.
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