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Post by Yushinoki on Feb 16, 2011 21:32:39 GMT
No, I originally wanted to learn more wind from Itachi, then after I saw giga's vote I remembered that Itachi also had a water affinity and liked the idea of double dipping in it.
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 16, 2011 22:41:15 GMT
"I want to train in Water Style, Genjutsu, and my special ability with you Itachi." you tell him, "And I want to work on Water Style, Taijutsu, and the basics with you Kisame."
"Fine. Looks like I should get going. See you in 2 months." Kisame smirks, as if he is thinking about how hard he's going to pummel you in 2 months. Kisame poofs away, and you're left alone with Itachi.
"Well, let's train." you say.
"Okay. I'm going to train you for 2 and a half weeks in Water Style, 2 and a half weeks in Genjutsu, and 3 weeks in your special ability." Itachi explains. "Let's go."
You follow Itachi through several hallways. On the way, you get to look out some windows. You see that you are several stories high, and that you seem to be in the middle of the village. You can see the rain, pouring down from the heavens. It feels a bit awkard, so you decide to break the silence.
"So, how come you joined Akatsuki?" you ask, trying not to get too personal.
"Are you trustworthy?" Itachi questions. You get thrown off by that random question.
"Umm, yeah. I keep my promises and don't tell others secrets. I don't see what the point is in doing that." you reply.
"Hmm. I joined Akatsuki because I'm a missing-nin. I killed my own clan, ran away. You should know all of this if you're village gathers information." Itachi remarks.
"Yeah, well I just wanted to know if your story was different." you tell him.
There's a moment of silence, than Itachi asks you, "Are you adopted." Another random question, and this one hits you harder.
"N..No..I'm not adopted." you stammer, "Why?"
"Well, I'm thinking of reasons how you could've gotten your ability. Do you have anyone in your family who is special?" Itachi asks.
"The only person special in my family was my grandfather, who was the best at Wind Style." you say.
"Hmm, Wind Style. That could explain how you can breathe on the moon. If he was so good, he could have made a jutsu that can make him breathe in space." Itachi wonders.
"That doesn't explain how I can get to the moon though," you remind him.
"We'll talk about this later. We're at your training place. I will teach you Water Style now." Itachi commands.
For the next 2 and a half weeks, you learn about Water Style and how to use it. It's tough, since Itachi never gives you any breaks. But now you can effectively use Water Style jutsus without a source. It is pretty amazing that you learned it in this time. Itachi is a great teacher, even if he's a bit strict. You even learned some jutsus. You learned "Water Style: Water Bomb Jutsu", "Water Style: Water Wall Justu", and "Water Style: Water Cyclone Jutsu".
"Wow, you really are a fast learner," Itachi remarks.
"Yeah, I know" you reply.
"Well, let's start training you in genjutsu." Itachi commands.
For the next 2 and a half weeks, you train in genjutsu. You didn't learn as fast as you did with the Water Style, but you did learn some tricks. You know how to look out for genjutsus, how to get out of them, how ot use Kai, the different senses you can use genjutsu with, and even one genjutsu. You learned "Ninja Style: Drowning River Jutsu", which makes the user believe that they are drowning in a river.
"You aren't a fast learner, but you did make progress." Itachi remarks.
"Well, let's start training on my special ability!" you shout, feeling drastically stronger than you were before.
"....Okay." Itachi responds.
For the next week, Itachi does genjutsus on your brain to try and see anything that you didn't know.
"Interesting." Itachi remarks at the end of the first week.
"What?" you ask, dreading that there is something important that was in your brain but you didn't know yourself.
"You talked to yourself when you were flying," Itachi jokes, laughing a little.
"Hey, that's personal." you say, embarrased.
"Actually though, I found something important. When you were born, your grandfather came and did complex seals on your chest. I think he sealed his skills into your body." Itachi responds, "And I think that I heard your grandfather's name. Jurin.
"What!" you exclaim, "My grandfather's name is Rijun."
"Hmm. Interesting. And is your mom's name Sari, your dad's name Dein, and your brother's name Kruas?" Itachi asks.
"No." you reply, worried a lot now, "My mom's name is Asri, my dad's name is Nide, and my brother's name is Uraks."
"One last question, is there a place called The Hospital Of Death?" Itachi inquires.
"No." you reply, your heartbeat racing.
"Well then," Itachi starts, "It seems like I figured something out. Your whole life in The Village Hidden in the Sky has been a lie"
(Next part coming soon)
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Post by giga on Feb 16, 2011 23:19:02 GMT
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 17, 2011 3:09:41 GMT
Everyone changed their names to anagrams of their original names! My life is OVER
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 17, 2011 22:42:07 GMT
"WHAT!!!" you yell, shocked from what he just said.
"It's just the facts," Itachi replies calmly, "Not only are the people you lived with name anagrams of the people in that thought, but there is no Hospital of Death. That, and that I can tell that all of your thoughts from then on were a genjutsu. You've been living your whole life by yourself, talking to yourself. The people you saw were just images caused by the genjutsu."
"...B..But.." you stammer, "How did my mom feed me?"
"..." Itachi pauses, "How does your village stay up in the sky again?"
"Well," you start, getting used to Itachi's random questions, "Everyone gives some of their chakra into a generator. Then, the generator convertes that chakra into energy, and it powers a magnet that repels the Earth's Core."
"But if your whole life is fake and you lived by your own, and trust me I know that this is the truth because I saw no one when you were past the age of 1, how does the Village levitate."
"Well.." you pause. You don't know. You know that you contributed only 5% of your chakra to the generator, and if no one else contributed, that means that the Village shouldn't be levitating.
"My only answer is that your grandfather must still be alive and living in the village. He put the genjutsu on you and he has been providing the food for you." Itachi explains.
"But where is everyone from my village? They were real. Did they all die?" you ask.
"I don't know. You'll probably only find more answers once you return to your village. But now, we will return our focus back to your special ability." Itachi commands, "There are several ways we can go from here. I can continue searching your brain for more info on your village, or I can look and see if I can activate your special ability in your brain. Or you can try and activate the special ability by yourself. Lastly, we can try to activate by me almost killing you. Which one will it be?"
A: Continue searching my brain for more info on my village.
B: Search my brain for a way to activate my ability.
C: I'll try to activate it on my own.
D: Try to almost kill me to activate it.
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 17, 2011 22:58:24 GMT
C
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Post by Yushinoki on Feb 17, 2011 23:11:14 GMT
C
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 17, 2011 23:46:28 GMT
D
When kisame fought us and put us in a seemingly life threatening situation was when we first activated it.
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 18, 2011 0:15:40 GMT
I'll update with C.
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 18, 2011 0:42:12 GMT
"I'll try to activate it on my own." you reply, feeling like it is the right thing to do.
"Okay, the best way to do it is to sit down, relax, and focus." Itachi says, leaving you alone in the room. You sit down and try to relax. But your mind is still racing with the news Itachi told you. Your brain is going crazy. But finally, after 15 minutes, you calm down. You focus, and look deep into your mind. You then clear your mind of all your thoughts, and focus. Immediately, you feel a pulling sensation, and your mind starts going haywire again. Your brain feels like it's going to explode. You then black out.
When you wake up, you gasp at what you see. You're staring up at the stars and into space. Your surrounded by stars, except for the ground, which feels hard. You look down to see a gray surface that feels like hard rock. You look to your left and right and see craters. It can't be, you think. You look back up at the sky and see the Earth. It's a beautiful sight, the oceans and lands. You take it all in. You're on the moon. And you're breathing.
You start walking around the moon. You're getting used to the low gravity, making huge leaps. You then see somthing in the distance. It looks like a house. You make your way to it, feeling happy and joyous. You can't understand why you feel like it. Probably because of the low gravity. You then make it to the house. It is exactly like the houses in your village, except that the house has craters, like the moon. You open the door and step in. If this was Earth, you would expect to see cobwebs and dust because no one could have visited this house in a while. But all you see is a regular house, because you're on the moon. You look around and find a scroll. You pick it up and read it. It says:
"Dear Grandson, If you are reading this, than you probably know that you are the only one left in the village, besides me. If you try to find me, I will tell you about our past. But it is one filled with war, so you do not have to find out if you don't want to. But anyway, the reason why you have the ability to go to the moon is because of me. I have found a scroll, written by the Sage of the Six Paths, on how to go to the moon. Once I read over it, I burned the scroll so no one else could have the power to reawaken the Ten-Tails. He made the jutsu so that we could reseal the Ten-Tails if he were to escape. He also wrote down the jutsu on how to breathe in space. I have written both jutsus down, so that you can learn them. I have left some vavluable objects too. A scroll on lots of ninjutsus, a scroll on genjutsus, a scroll on a certain type of taijutsu, a scroll on the Sage of the Six Paths, and a scroll on what I did in my life. I hope you will become a strong and powerful shinobi. Also, there are plenty of meteorites lying aroung the place, so you can hit people with them. But you can learn on how to make them with ninjutsu. This place is basically a safe haven, a sanctuary and a place to train. To return back to Earth, place your hand on my signature. Well, I hope you live your life to the fullest. Love, Jurin."
You read the scroll over again. You know that your grandfather must have been one powerful shinobi, and a kind one too. You feel tears swelling up, but you push them back. Right now, you should be training. You should probably take a scroll with you when you return to Itachi. But you should only take one right now, to be honorable and not lose them. Which one will you take?
A: Scroll of Ninjutsu.
B: Scroll of Genjutsu.
C: Scroll of Taijutsu.
D: Scroll of the Sage of the Six Paths.
E: Scroll of Jurin, your grandfather.
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Post by hatthatt on Feb 18, 2011 0:55:00 GMT
I don't quite understand the MC's power.... is it just teleportation to space and and teleportation back to the general vicinity of his original spot? He disappears and comes back to throw a meteor in his enemy's face or just disappears to space to go away from danger?
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Post by Yushinoki on Feb 18, 2011 1:01:59 GMT
E
Also, as an aside, the Moon's surface is covered in a layer of regolith (basically rock that has been pulverized by meteoroid impacts into a fine dust, which gets courser the deeper you go), so it wouldn't feel like solid rock.
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 18, 2011 1:13:49 GMT
To hatthatt, the MC was using jutsus that were sealed into him. So his power is the ability to go to the moon, and the ability to use high level wind jutsus, which is what the breathing in space is. And remember, VOTE!!!
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 18, 2011 1:17:59 GMT
E
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 18, 2011 1:38:31 GMT
A
We can find out what grandfather did in his life when we meet him. We're still at the beginning of this CYOA, we need to get develop our abilities.
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Post by Yushinoki on Feb 18, 2011 1:47:28 GMT
I'm going under the assumption that his scroll would contain information on moves related to our special ability.
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 18, 2011 1:52:23 GMT
It might, but mainly it's about what grandfather did during his life. Even if it did contain information on moves related to our special ability, it wouldn't tell us how to actually learn the moves.
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Post by giga on Feb 18, 2011 2:17:10 GMT
E
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Post by overtninja on Feb 18, 2011 11:00:43 GMT
A
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 18, 2011 21:04:10 GMT
Updating with E.
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 19, 2011 0:41:11 GMT
You decide to take the scroll that is about your grandfather's life. You want to learn more about your grandfather, and maybe it will tell you more about yourself. You take the scroll and place your hand on your grandfather's signature. You feel a tugging sensation, and see a flash of white light. You blink. You're back in the room with Itachi, who is staring at you.
"So, it seems as if you activated you're special ability." Itachi says, "Good, good. You still have a week and 6 days. Once those days are over, I will fight against you to see how much you have improved. See you later."
"Bye." you tell Itachi as he leaves the room. You then open your scroll and start reading it.
"Dear Grandson, My life has been a very....interesting one. When I was 8, I was already using S-Class wind style techniques. My parents were very proud of me, and lots of people were asking how I did it. It just seemed easy to me, I told them. By the time I was 13, I was already doing Dives every week to gather more and more information. I also started creating some new jutsus and training in Fire and Earth Style jutsus.
When I was 15, I found an interesting place down on Earth. It was the tomb of the Sage of The Six Paths. I can't tell you the exact location of the place, since it is always moving. In their I found lots of scrolls and information about the Sage. I learned how to travel to the moon and how to breathe in space. The Sage created the jutsu so if the Ten-Tails ever broke free, someone could seal it again. I learned lots of seals and other jutsus too. And I learned a new summon. They live on the moon. They use to live on Earth, but they were going extinct so the Sage let them live on the moon. You should try to find them.
By the age of 18, I had already created lots of jutsus that were past S-Class rank jutsus. I was looked up to by everyone, and made important decisions in politics. When I was 21, a young lady caught my eye, I went on several dates with her, and then proposed to her. On the moon. I let my breathing jutsu cover her. She was in awe. And she said yes. When I was 25, your grandmother gave birth to your father. He was a good lad. He couldn't get as skilled as I did in Wind Style, but he was better than most of his fellow pupils. When I was 47, your dad married a lady that he took a fancy to.
When I was 50, you were born. You were a beautiful, healthy baby. And then I decided to do something. I didn't want to die with my powers not passed on to any of my generation. So I decided to seal the majority of my skills into you That's why you are good in all the elements. I gave you Wind, Fire, and Earth, and you were already special in Water and Lightning. That gave you all the elements at your disposal. I was proud and happy. But then, strange foreign people came to our village. They demanded that the village should be given to them, because they would end up ruling the world. They wore no headbands, and we never found out where they came from. We didn't give it to them naturally, and they started a war with us. They were about as strong as I was and about 50 of them, so it was a hard war.
They came to our village, and started fighting us for 2 days straight, every week. It ended up lasting 4 months. On the first battle, I decided to send you to the moon so you were safe. I knew you could breathe on the moon because of the skills I gave you. On the final battle, we were winning, and there was only one person left. He was fighting crazy, desperately. He said that if he couldn't have this village, we couldn't either. He then shouted, "Creation Style: Heavenly Death Jutsus!". All around us, people just started exploding from the inside out. Even the user did. I knew that it was only a matter of time before I exploded. I created a clone and sent him to the moon, hoping that he wasn't effected by this jutsu. Two seconds later, I exploded.
My clone decided to bring you back to Earth, and let you live life the way you should have. The clone implanted the genjutsu into you, and he has been constantly providing energy to the village's generator. He even gave you food and water. The clone is probably still living there. And there is something else you should know. There is a hidden scroll in my house, that if you can find it, you are worthy to read. It has details on how to combine the elements, and that you can combine them into a different release depending on your character. Well, that's about all. I hope you live a good life. Love, Jurin."
You feel tears welling up inside again. This time you don't try to push them back. You can't believe that your whole village got destroyed, by a group of strangers. They will pay, if there are more of them. You read it over and over again, gathering every detail you can. You decide that you should rest. But what will you do tommorow?
A: Go to the moon.
B: Train on genjutsu.
C: Train on Water Style.
D: Go to your village.
E: See if Itachi can teach you anything else.
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Post by someclown911 on Feb 19, 2011 0:49:03 GMT
A
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Post by Yushinoki on Feb 19, 2011 1:12:27 GMT
A
Let's see if we can't find those summon/that other scroll.
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Post by iceisnice on Feb 19, 2011 1:57:36 GMT
A
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Post by dragonfantasy on Feb 19, 2011 2:40:00 GMT
Updating with A.
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