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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 18:40:13 GMT
(new CYOA I'm starting, enjoy. I'm going to try to get a lot of the intro stuff out in the first couple posts so there will be a lot of things to choose from in the first couple posts)
You awaken softly rubbing your temple. You get off your small mat and make your way across your small apartment building. The training you had done all your life had prepared you for today your chance to join the extreme ranks of the Kumogakure ANBU forces. Walking over to the bathroom you examine your features seeing the face and body you'd become so familiar with
Since birth you'd been reared for this day given more extensive training than most other ninjas because of the potential you'd shown at such an early age. Today you had to prove that this extensive training was the prime way to create near perfect shinobi weapons for whatever Kumogakure needed. Whether you followed your orders diligently or had your own agenda was yet to be revealed but one thing was for sure you knew your training had payed off
You look back at your reflection and stare at yourself taking in your features that looked like
Sex A: Male B: Female C: My pick
Age A: Under 13 B: 13-19 C: 20-30 D: 30-40 E: 50-60 F: 60+ G: My pick
Hair Length A: Short B: Long C: Shoulder length D: Waist length E: Other F: My pick
Hair Color A: Black B: Brown C: Blonde D: Red E: Blue F: Green G: Gray H: White I: Other J: My pick
Eye Color A: Black B: Brown C: Blue D: Green E: Gray F: Other G: My pick
Height A: Tall B: Average C: Short D: Other G: My pick
Frame A: Large B: Medium C: Small D: My pick
Build A: Jacked B: Muscular C: Athletic D: Fit E: Average F: Below average G: Other H: My pick
Skin Tone A: Dark skinned B: Naturally tanned C: White D: Fair E: Other H: My pick
(I realize that's a familiar system to some but I promise that this'll be heading in a different direction)
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on May 30, 2011 18:54:05 GMT
A D -32 A - Slicked back and tapered at the end E - A very dark blue, almost black except in certain white light like moonlight E - A dark grey, almost like steely blue B B C E - Pale
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Post by xTacticalSniper on May 30, 2011 19:41:02 GMT
Cactus's
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Post by dragonfantasy on May 30, 2011 19:41:05 GMT
B (we have a male in Umetals new one) A (a child prodigy) B (pretty sure this is rare among MC's of CYOA's) A (this is a rare color of hair among female ninja in Naruto) B (didn't really matter) B (didn't really matter) B (didn't really matter) C (realistic for a 13 and under) B
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Post by mrdrman on May 30, 2011 20:20:13 GMT
A B B A E C C C E-Pale
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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 21:15:37 GMT
The way I see it there's a winner in everything except hair length and color. If no one tiebreaks those soon I'll go ahead and post and let that be resolved later but so far the way I see it it's going to be
A D A or B E or A E B B C E (pale)
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Post by Yushinoki on May 30, 2011 21:38:45 GMT
B B A D D C C C B
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Post by giga on May 30, 2011 21:43:54 GMT
Cactus'
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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 21:55:43 GMT
Hair length is still tied up but I'll go ahead and be posting
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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 22:02:52 GMT
Name: ? ? ? Gender: Male Age: 32 Hair Length: Short Hair Color: Blue Eyes: Gray Height: 5'11'' Frame: Medium Build: Athletic Skin Tone: Pale
Rank: ? ? ? Role: ? ? ? Affinity: ? ? ?
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Post by Yushinoki on May 30, 2011 22:06:47 GMT
Switched hair length vote to short (A).
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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 22:19:48 GMT
You look at your pale skin and short blue hair, a rarity here in Kumogakure though you've hardly ever gone into the village in your thirty-two years of life. Most of your life had been spent in solitude training and studying to properly serve Kumo, thirty-two years leading up until this day. After you wash up you exit your apartment and make your way through the various corridors passing the various rooms you've spent the majority of your life in
Finally you find the stairwell you're looking for and begin to go down to the testing room you've been told to go to. The stairs spiral downwards for quite some time until you're finally brought to another long corridor that's lit by only a few lights. You walk down the corridor until you come to a door and knock on it, you then hear the Raikage's loud booming voice exclaim "Enter!"
You inhale deeply as you walk into the large white room with several target dummies, weapons, and other things you'd seen in some of your training rooms. On the opposite side from the entrance is a large table, behind it sat the Raikage, his younger brother, the village Elders, three jounins, and four ANBUs. You walk to the middle of the room as one of the ANBUs finally speaks.
"You know what is expected of you today don't you? You're to show all of the skills that you have learned over the past years and prove that you are worthy of joining the Special ANBU or SANBU. You're expected to show any weapons skills, as well as a pleater of jutsu, and then only then will you be allowed to join an order so small and elite that few even know about it," one of the ANBUs said
"I understand," you say bowing, "You'd been thought all the formalities of this process throughout the years. Not only did you learn to be a true shinobi you also learned the political and social games to prompt you for any future situations. You approach the weapons tables and look at the assortment, the same assortment you'd seen several times throughout the years and mastered one of. On top of just being good with these you'd have to show off your jutsu capabilities which you were skilled at as well
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Post by kieo on May 30, 2011 22:35:23 GMT
Basically you need to pick from one Weapon Role which defines the style that the character will use throughout the CYOA. While picking one as your primary there may be chances to pick up some skills from others in the future. Then pick one of your other skills
Weapon Roles: Assassin >Uses hidden blades for assassinations. Masters of stealth and speed. Also uses katanas and throwing knives. Strong ninjutsu and taijutsu base though average genjutsu
Marksman >Master bowsman. Can take about any throwing weapon and hit a target with near perfect accuracy. Uses basic tanto as a primary melee weapon. Strong ninjutsu and average genjutsu while having weak taijutsu
Brute >Focuses on hand to hand combat with little to no weapons except small things such as knives or brass knuckles. Master taijutsu and even speed average to weak in the other fields
Knight >User of larger weapons as well as defensive weapons. Can handle broadswords or axes with ease as well as shield. Master taijutsu and decent ninjutsu user though weak in genjutsu and speed
Mage >Master of ninjutsu and genjutsu though uses little to know weapons and lacks in taijutsu and speed
Skills: Heat Bloodline >Controls all forms of heat from the complete absence of heat to the hottest of flames (katon and suiton base element)
Mastery of Element >Complete mastery over one elemental field, can gain other elements in the future but they'll never be this strong (choose which one)
Trielemental Powers >Strong use of three elements but little to no power in any other (choose which three)
Body Manipulation Bloodline >Allows to control body parts such as stretching limbs and great control over muscles and bodily functions
Diamond Bloodline >Allows creation of diamonds and manipulation of them, one of the ultimate defense bloodlines (doton will be primary element)
Etheral Bloodline >Allows advanced manipulation of chakra to create etheral weapons at your disposal such as swords and fists (wind and raiton base elements)
Other >Pick one and I'll say if it's okay
If you guys need anything else let me know
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Post by overtninja on May 30, 2011 22:37:41 GMT
Assassin with heat bloodline please.
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Post by Bazooka_Rose_Penguin on May 30, 2011 22:44:42 GMT
Assassin
Other Stand (totally stealing this from Jojo), your chakra takes on a physical form as a humanoid being that stands within 10m of your body. It is ultra fast, extremely powerful, quiet, and has the ability to create a zone of absolute silence in which every thing slows down (by controlling the air pressure). And its (the stand) name would be like Danger Zone.
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Post by overtninja on May 31, 2011 6:48:15 GMT
Can people see it?
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Post by dragonfantasy on May 31, 2011 11:38:31 GMT
Assassin Etheral Bloodline
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Post by overtninja on May 31, 2011 13:04:32 GMT
changing vote to Ethreal bloodline
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Post by iceisnice on May 31, 2011 14:58:05 GMT
Could we have an advanced chakra control bloodline where we can no seal all of our techniques?
I'm thinking that with the mage. That way we can AOE barrage people with genjutsu and couple that with a barrage of ninjutsu at the same time. Yes, it will be possible to use more than one ninjutsu/genjutsu at the same time because it's that way in Kieo's other CYOA..........unless Kieo trolls us and changes the rules for this CYOA. It would be almost impossible to defend against both at the same time because you can have to kai and use a defensive technique too. And even if they could they will have no chance to attack because we can pull out ninjutsu/genjutsu so fast all they can do is play defense.
Just think about it: 1. We don't need taijutsu, every time someone tries to engage us in taijutsu we can form a explosive clone and substitute with it. We can also substitute with hundreds of logs in a forest at near instantaneous speeds so no one would be able to catch up with us. Orochimaru could not even dream of approaching that substitution speed. We can form several tornadoes around us almost instantaneously. All that is required of us is the speed of thought and if we're stacking jutsu the necessary time to build up the chakra for the stacked jutsu. Of course we might not even have to do this if our oppenent can't find a solution to get past our simultaneous genjutsu and ninjutsu barrage. 2. Our versatility would be greater then even Reiz. Reiz cannot use two jutsu at the same time. While we can still pull off two jutsu at the same time with one hand seals because of Kieo's rules, we can do more then two things at a time if we wanted to. 3. Because of our advanced chakra control, dispelling genjutsu would be child's play.
Then there are the cons: 1. Our attacks would not be as strong as attacks centered around dual elements or other KG. But we can compensate some of this by stacking our ninjutsu. It would just not be as chakra efficient as a KG attack. 2. There will be nothing unique about this character in battle other then the speed he can cast ninjutsu. To that I say who cares, Takeshi from A Road to Manhood was an entertaining read in spite of having no KG.
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Post by giga on May 31, 2011 15:45:13 GMT
Knight Diamond
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Post by kieo on May 31, 2011 16:41:30 GMT
Ehhh I don't know Ice that seems way to broken, though you may've given me a good idea for a villain...
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Post by iceisnice on May 31, 2011 17:11:06 GMT
oh noes.....
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Post by Forte on Jun 1, 2011 4:45:58 GMT
Marksman, Ethereal bloodline.
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Post by kieo on Jun 1, 2011 17:41:31 GMT
You quickly grab the assassin style weapons you had become so familiar with adjusting the hidden blade to your left wrist, strapping the katana to your side, and placing the throwing knives in their holster on your sides. You quickly grab a throwing knife and throw it at a dummy, then another, then another, then another. All of the throwing knives hitting fatal or close to fatal points. The Raikage snaps and two ANBU appear and charge at you with their tantos in hand
You quickly draw your katana and begin to block the ANBUs ruthless attacks. As their assault continues you parry one of their attacks and release your hidden blade, stabbing the ANBU in the throat causing it to disappear in a puff of smoke. The other ANBU continues to attack so you quickly spin in place blocking the tanto slash. As you're held in a deadlock you quickly push the ANBU away with all your might while reaching for a throwing knife and piercing the ANBU in the stomach before you spin in place again and slash his head off with your katana causing him to disappear in a puff of smoke
You look to the panel of ninjas in front of you as they stare at you diligently. "I heard you had a rare bloodline...show it to me," Raikage says scratching his goatee
"Yes sir," you say as your hands begin to glow. You perform a long sleight of hand seals. "Ethereal Release: Judgement Fists!" Two large fists appeared in front of you that you were able to control with your own. You swing your arms around and the fists move before you ram it into a nearby wall, quickly destroying the wall
You quickly dispel the jutsu before doing another one which summoned fifty ethereal balls in front of you. "Ethereal Release: Rapid Fire!" You say as the balls all flew and slammed into the wall opposite you, eventually destroying it. After performing the jutsu you slowly walk back to the center of the room and kneel before the group sitting in front of you
"Congratulations, today you're officially born as a member of the ANBU. Your training has paid off and today I will give you a name, from this day forward you shall be Fang, a tool of Kumogakure to do as we, your elite say. Understood?" the Raikage says beaming down at you
A: You respond in a sarcastic tone though you're still loyal B: You respond in a bitter tone though you're still loyal C: You respond in a loyal tone D: You respond in a sarcastic tone though you hate him E: You respond in a bitter tone though you hate him F: You respond in a loyal tone though you hate him
(this will determine your personality throughout the CYOA so choose wisely)
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Post by xTacticalSniper on Jun 1, 2011 18:06:11 GMT
D
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